What do you think of my story?

I liked it! It was very suspenseful from what I read, but it's hard to really get a feeling of the nature of the story with just a small portion of the writings. I do like when you described the moonlight surrounding the Angel, and then being blocked out when he moved, only to be surrounded by the pale light again when he took a step foreward. That paragraph really gave me an interesting image in my head of the terrified narrator and the massive Angel. All in all, that was a great selection from the story. I really liked your description and the general idea of the story. Two thumbs up!