Would you want to read on?

I would read more of this. This is awesome! Lots of people post junk on here but this is a great scene. The descriptions are good, the flow is great and the paragraphs are easy to read and the right length. The content is good and it builds interest. It isn't too wordy but has enough detail so we get the idea. This isn't what I would picture an Angel to look like but I am guessing this relates to the story in some way. Dead monsters, killers and angels could make for an interesting story! This is a great piece. Best of luck!